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Fuck it's hot

-The End
This poem... I can't tell you how long I have been fighting to pull this together. Night after night of hair ripping and frustration I have tried so hard to do this.. In the end I have finally done it. I have done what I have so longed to come up with. This poem.. I tried to make it based off of my other poem, winter poem ( fav.me/d6wuxaw ). I think.. I have finally done it.. It brings tears to my eyes on how much emotion this brings out in me. How well written it is done.. how..I was able to do it.. I would like to thank everyone who has patted my back as I cried on their shoulder over this.. thank you.. everyone..
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weltzuu Featured By Owner 21 hours ago  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm speechless. A masterpiece once again. Such skills... such... wow. You indeed are talented. #godlikegenius So Amazing! - Eddsworld Edd Icon 
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wuz2blu Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2015
I laughed really hard when I read this. And then I laughed harder after I gave a rippingly emotional performance of your poem for my wife who happened to be sitting across the room from me. For the record, she was very moved.

(Also, it was even more enjoyable to us because we're experiencing something of a heatwave for the last--and, according to the weather forecast, well into the next--couple weeks.)

Thank you for adding joy to our lives in a challenging time.
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sugarhigh123 Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2015
Deeper than the Mariana Trench omg. :iconclapplz:
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Treble-Heart Featured By Owner May 27, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
oooh heres my summer poem



fuckn heatwavesssssssssssssssssssssss

-The End
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GentleWillow Featured By Owner May 8, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
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Absolutely amazing.
Brought tears to my eyes. 
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Gladddragon Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Lol.. I live in Arizona enough said..
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Dream-Queen13 Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Love TOO....BEAUTIFUL......!Love 
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PatzytheCat Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
OMG SO MUCH WOW JUST I CRAI SO BUETIFUL OMG
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Bonnie-Bunny12345 Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
it is wonderful
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Finemastertree Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2015  Hobbyist
-crys- just beautiful..Jake crying plz 
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taffy122 Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
XD
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Al-24 Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2015
nice. Straight to the point.
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marzlikespie Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2015
I almost cried... This is deep af
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Ripplingwaves Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2014
So touching!
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VanniDraw445 Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
This is beautiful and made my day.
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wonderlei Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2014  Student General Artist
This is beautiful.
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Pikazilla1956 Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2014
amen
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KittyStarGears2190 Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
bootiful just bootiful
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ctton Featured By Owner Edited Aug 16, 2014
yeah i know...:randomlaugh: but not that hot Nommy smile 
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:iconpiweed:
Piweed Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
What inspired you to compose such a divine poem?
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ursachidorina Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2014
:)))
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ZEGH8578 Featured By Owner Edited Aug 6, 2014
Moving, heart-felt, and genuine. From the beginning a sense of tension, a dragged out presence of intense awareness, and as it progresses, the nature of the composition becomes more compressed, into the final culmination of a pure expression of inner truth. It IS hot. Fuck.
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wombatlover Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2014
I think that you have truly captured the very essence of summer in a way that very few of us can. The style, the rhythm, and the emotion show behind every word and together form one of the most eloquent pieces of art I have ever come across. Thank you for writing this. I will never view my summers the same way again.
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PrincessEmbraceMLP Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This, this is amazing. 
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PartilleHSC Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2014  Student Artist
Wow. Thats so deep. I nearly cried ;( 
Great work!!
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spearmint-toothpaste Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That was deep.
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MarkSake Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you for these words of truth, they moved me deeply.
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Kneobert Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Fuck I cried.
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BlackVinyl Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2014  Student Digital Artist
LMAO
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Jasmine-Lotus Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Can you do a back to school poem
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Hazard-Trash Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
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Fuck it's schooltime

-The End

I wouldn't really know how to do it. xD
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Jasmine-Lotus Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
HA love it.I would've just said ''Fuck School''
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MalzMais Featured By Owner Edited Aug 3, 2014
Magnificent!
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That rememberd me at this one childhood moment I had..brought tears to my eyes! 
Goethe? Shakespear? Kafka?
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ArtsyRingedPegasus Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2014  Hobbyist
:iconrlytearplz: Beautiful. I give it an 11/10
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Exzl Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
My heart is racing
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Aria-Art Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Brilliant composure. 
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gnazlis Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2014
ingenious!!!
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TheyCallMeUrska Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Deep
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inoscourgegaming Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2014  Student Writer
10/10 ign
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chksngr713 Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2014
lol. that is very funny .
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Muffyma Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Are you the reincarnation of Goethe?
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CatGirlCuteness Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2014
ALMOST AS GOOD AS BUDDER!!!

(ok not really.....#SkyDoesMinecraft)
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CathlynnBixby Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
 How are you not famous?! 10/10 as good as Robert Frost.
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ekkateerinna Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2014  Student General Artist
I haven't cried so much in my entire life.
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PepperLeafify Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2014
Such....such amazingness...
This poem has brought me to tears...
-Sniffle- Well done...
Llama Emoji-08 (Crying) [V1] 
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solarkittygirl Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Such bootiful
Much amaze
Wow
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slendycreeper Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This poem brings tears to my eyes.
The emotion is so strong.
Let us cry together.
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Nannine03 Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2014  Student Digital Artist
This made me tear up a bit.
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Marry-An Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I cri evritim.
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AerialNavigation Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
THIS STILL GETS ME
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