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Fuck it's cold

-The End
Them emotions..
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actualbagel Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
my....my god....

it's so beautiful and meaningful

i cannot describe how deep and gorgeous your writing is

if you ask me i rate it 69 stars
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N8V52 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This poem has a deeper meaning, it changed my life.
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PrincessEmbraceMLP Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Such beauty with words. 
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VanniDraw445 Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Them emotions. This is so deep shit
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dragongirl582 Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I live in Florida :iconnelsonplz:
:iconmingplz: but it still gets cold
though not to much..........................
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dquinlanz Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2014
10/10
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inoscourgegaming Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2014  Student Writer
IGN
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Sabine101 Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2014  Student General Artist
Lol
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LaughMakerAna Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
So...So true! 
The feels are everywhere!
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S--l--N--A--L--U Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
A single tear ran down my face from the raw emotion just emanating from this poem!
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DorianPavus Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2014   Digital Artist
XDDDDD truth
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Kurt-is-cry Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I HATE YOU SO MUCH. XD
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Minxy123 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2014  Student General Artist
This just made my life better.
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ConArtist-666 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This is actually realy accurate
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DorianPavus Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2014   Digital Artist
Trololo.
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ConArtist-666 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Might as well give this guy 50 Oscars for his artistic talent
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DorianPavus Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2014   Digital Artist
51.
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ConArtist-666 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
......... *thinks*.............. 51 *nods*
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DorianPavus Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2014   Digital Artist
:D
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geminiwolf683 Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
"AND THEY HAPPILY LIVED EVER AFTER." The end
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BananerzBonk Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
THIS IS SUM DEEP SH*T 
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StargazerDesign Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014  Hobbyist Interface Designer
*standing ovation* XD
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DorianPavus Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2014   Digital Artist
XD.
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Dragongirlwithwings Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014
I can't breath XD Laugh LOL 
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WaffIeWolf Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Amazing. Such emotion is expressed in this... I'm touched. Wolf Crying 
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SpringSakura14 Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014
XDD You deserve an award my good sir! :iconlikeasirplz:
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Lightninging63 Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014   Traditional Artist
Deeply moving stuff here.
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IvyFlame64 Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014   Traditional Artist
WELL SAID, SIR! WELL SAID! Clap Joker Clap Homura Clapping Icon 
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joseph-esapa Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014
Such words. Many talent
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kocsogPityu Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014
BEST. POEM. EVER. :iconclapplz:
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raymanluv Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014  Student Artist
oh my gosh... swearing must be banned forever!
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MarvelHero977 Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I love that unexpected twist at the end, you're expecting the issue to resolve and end happily, but no. The harsh reality is, it still cold.
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Jimperbam Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014
Absolutely incredible. If you aren't a professional, you should be. This was beautiful.
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Ask-Broken-Peace Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Glorious, just glorious, Edger Allen Poe ain't to nothin' on this! 10/10, dem feels
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II-edison-II Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Another emotive poem :D 
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EvelynMeyer Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hahahahahaha......xD.....nice.....very nice....Hahahahaha
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XxXKatrina-StarXxX Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
lol
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JazmineTheWolf Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014  Student Artist
FUCK YEA!

ITS LIKE FUCKEN -1c IN MY DARN COUNTRY!
AND MY CHAT SCOOL IS SO FUCKEN POOR THEY CANT EVEN AFFORED HEATERS!
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FireSprinklez Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Beats all them poems :)
Nominated winner for best poems! Woohoo.
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lightfeather5632 Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
*still laughing*
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buggerbug50 Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
...

Fuck I can't

-These poems

In all honesty these are pretty hilarious
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Sorrowscoldfrost Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014
Okay, so this and that summer poem have literally just made my day. I think I almost died laughing.
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SandwichEverywhere Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014  Hobbyist
OH REALLY? xD
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Flareon-of-Isis Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Oh, you have one. xD This is excellent, as well Cx
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Benthehyena Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
The words are so touching. Victor Hugo and Charles Baudelaire would be proud of you.
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Takane-E Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
((This is the best poem I had ever read. *claps*
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Insanedrunkmidget Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2014
ITS SO EMOTIONAL!!! (In emotional voice.)
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MarkushAvalone Featured By Owner May 25, 2014
look at harsh comment, ugh bitches got to learn

love and agree, although Indonesia is tropical country, but heck.....the weather is never stable, that's why I am too lazy for bath

note: although tropical country and doesn't have snow/winter, 18 degrees celsius is too fucking cold
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Sashel506 Featured By Owner May 24, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I needed this poem to cheer me up again.:'D But I wish I can relate to that..
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somerrocks Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
your way with words are brilliant, they nearly bring me to tears.
:'D
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